Kia ora,
Today I have been creating a haiku about a forest.
A haiku is a short poem with five snobs in the first line, seven in the second and using five in the third line making a pattern of 5 7 5.
I enjoyed creating my haiku but I found it challenging to get the snoblys right.
Ma te wa
Irelyn
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Kia ora Irelyn. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poems. So many great poems presented in such great ways. Have you thought about using Sceencastify to record some?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Irelyn!
ReplyDeleteIt is Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
This is a beautiful haiku! I love the line 'Trees climbing for light'! That is very clever and full of imagery!
It is great you putting it over a nice picture as well!
Keep up the awesome poem writing!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)