Saturday, 15 January 2022

Cleaning the storage pile

 Kia ora,


Today I cleaned up are storage pile in the garage and there was so much food there was juce chips and so many cans so once I was finished I decided to write a poem about it.


In my poem I named some of the food I found in the sorge pile. 


I hope you enjoy reading my poem 


Ma te wa

Irelyn





1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Irelyn. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. I love the way you have been inspired by the things around you to write your poems. This one reminds me of a Quatrain which Kylah just taught me about. Have you seen this post that she did?

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