Today I have been creating a magnetic poem on google drawing.
For this task my challenge was to create a poem using words about summer.
I enjoyed making this poem because I have never done a magnetic poem before.
Next time I would only use 5 nouns to make it harder.
Ma te wa
Irelyn
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Kia ora Irelyn. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the way you used lots of colours in your poem. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
ReplyDeleteKia ora phil,
Deletethanks for the links i will check hem out now.
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteIrelyn
My name is Quein and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed your poem. When I was reading it I could imagine the beach and the grass. It is fantastic that you seek to challenge yourself a bit next time, that is an important quality to have when we are learning. It is fantastic to see that you have a give it a go mindset that will serve you well in the future. You should be very proud of your fantastic creative mahi!!!
An interesting fact is that magnetic poetry was invented by Dave Kapel and that he was a songwriter. Do you have any tips for your fellow bloggers who may like to give it a go?
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Have a Super Summer!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein
Kia ora Irelyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat work completing the kick start poetry slam activity. Awesome to hear you enjoyed this activity, and that you tried something new - ka pai!
You’ve crafted a wonderful poem with very few words, well done! I like the way you have carefully described a summer day, it made me feel like I was at the beach!
I’d love to see your next poem challenge, completing the task with less nouns!
I hope you are having a fantastic summer.
Ngā mihi,
Lauren